This is my reading contract

(BLACK) I could put alot more writing in my sentences next time

(YELLOW) I have put alot of god infomataion into my questions

This is my #WOW5 it is my reading work from class

(BLACK) I could work on my descriptive sentences next time

(YELLOW)I have used good full stops

This is my WOW 4 and it is my second sexy paragraph

(BLACK) I could improve on my fulstops and capital letters next time.

(YELLOW) I think i have used my example for x really well

This is my WOW 3 and it is my first sexy paragraph and it is about boys are bettere than girls because

(BLACK) I think i could improve on my descriptive laungage and my descriptive words

(YELLOW) I think i have writien really good paragraphs in my story

This is my WOW 2 for this term and this piece of writing is my formal vs informal that we ahd to do.

(BLACK) I could improve on using more descriptive words in my piece of writing next time.

(YELLOW)  W.A.L.T use descriptive laungage in our formal and informal writing

This is my WOW about the school holidays  and how i got my cousin connor over to stay for the last to days of the school holidays and we went camping down the back if the farm by our river.

(BLACK) I could improve on my descriptive laungage and descriptive words in my writing next time

(YELLOW)   W.A.L.T use 5 scences in our writing and use descriptive laungage to

 This is WOW for this week .

These are  my Flash facts score from the first six weeks see how I have got highish scores in the first ones but then I have droped.

This is my WOW for this week

I chosse this piece of work because this is one of my best pieces of writing out of the three that we had to writ in our draft books.

( Black hat ) I could have used more 5 scences

( Yellow hat ) I went back and edited it more than two times

I anxiously walk out to the playground looking at the soaking wet bars all around me wich one do i use they are wet and all different sizes. But Ive got to chosse one becaues they are just about all gone then at the corner of my eye I catch  a glimps of a small blue bar so i sprint to the bar. When I get there i look all  around and all i can see is people stretching there fingers and people drying the bar so that they can get there grip on the bar. Then Mrc said go and i reached up and grabbed the bar i look around and i can here is people grunting and saying i can do this. Then my hands started to slip but i held myself up there then i droped and the feeling of my feet hitting the ground felt like getting a shock without any shoes on. And when i looked at my hands they were red and i could see the blisters on my hand were about to pop through my hands and make them ack really really bad but after a while my hands came back to normal and my feet felt normal agian.

My goal was to use 5 scences and use really descriptive words.

My WOW this week is my swimming goal because my swimming goal is that when I am kicking in the pool my feet are always splashing water and in the last week of swimming I have stoped kicking my feet in the water as much and that makes my swimming alot better